I'm pretty sure I saw you working on an even better version of this pose.
What I like about this pose is the dialgonal flow of energy and emotion through the line of action. The arms and left leg provide strong lines. The right leg is bent showing it is a strong support
The pose was being improved when I saw it with a smoother curve through the body controllers and some extra tilt in the core control and pelvis. The top body controller was more smoothly aligned to remove the jagged steps. The left arm or head could be repositioned to improve the clarity of the silouhette and not have them clash together. That adjustment could be driven by firstly tilting the shoulders. Consider slight bends in the elbows as a comparison to the rigid straight arms, then choose the version that is more appealing to you.
Good pose, I like your facial expressions as well. Good line of action.
ReplyDeleteI'm pretty sure I saw you working on an even better version of this pose.
ReplyDeleteWhat I like about this pose is the dialgonal flow of energy and emotion through the line of action. The arms and left leg provide strong lines. The right leg is bent showing it is a strong support
The pose was being improved when I saw it with a smoother curve through the body controllers and some extra tilt in the core control and pelvis. The top body controller was more smoothly aligned to remove the jagged steps. The left arm or head could be repositioned to improve the clarity of the silouhette and not have them clash together. That adjustment could be driven by firstly tilting the shoulders. Consider slight bends in the elbows as a comparison to the rigid straight arms, then choose the version that is more appealing to you.
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